Sophia on Editing and Punctuation

NL-Sophia apparently likes Al’s writing. She just thinks she needs to "edited" it to correct the spelling and punctuation mistakes, "weather" you like it or not. . lmao.

 

written by Sophia Mounds

He might be a really good writer, if luke-smokes-crack would try something on her site called editing. Even the best writers need good editor’s. No one has the patience or ability to sit threw her unedited posts. I read them and I think to myself, ”why didn’t she edited this”. His writing could have been edited and it would have made his writing easier to read.This is my site and I do edit all of the posts, weather you like it or not! I do spelling checks, edit run on sentences and things that don’t make any sense. Not because the writer sucks, but because its the right thing to do. You can see the original post on Luke is back, I fixed the spelling and made it make sense.  This is supper funny to me, because Luke-smokes-crack and a few of her full of hot air friends, said ” I was dumb and couldn’t write”. But I don’t know how many spelling errors, I have found in her writing and her so called friends writings.

9 thoughts on “Sophia on Editing and Punctuation

  1. jeremiahsteele says:

    One only needs to dig six feet to dig their own grave.

    I think Sophia has already dug about six miles.

  2. The Colonel says:

    Germy, you should have killed Sophia when you had the chance, what do know, man? You can still do it. Better late than never.

  3. jeremiahsteele says:

    There are laws against killing unless you’re a soldier running footloose in a foreign country.

    Colonel, could you imagine if I had hit her how insane she would be? She’s already insane now.

  4. The Colonel says:

    Fuck the law, man. Just kill her. I’ll help you get rid of the body.

  5. Coronel we all own Germy a big apology for giving him a hard time after the Sophia Mounds fist discipline incident. Now I hope Germy really hit her. Hard,really hard. You must have more selfcontrol than a monk to avoid hitting someone like her.

  6. The Colonel says:

    Poor Germy, I can’t imagine how much he had suffered during the time he was dealing with Sophia as his roomate. I don’t wish that on anybody.

  7. jeremiahsteele says:

    God bless you fellas. I’m glad after she attacked and slandered me that I baited her onto the internet so she could reveal the cracked, evil psycho-nut, inhuman human that she is. If I had hit her there surely would have beeen evidence of that, believe me, and yes I had more self control than a monk being pawed at by 10 high price hookers at an after hours lounge.

    This woman would talk and talk and yell and argue when I’m just trying to relax or have a phone conversation. The night she attacked me, before that she was screaming at me, and I nearly threw my voice out trying to calm her down.

    On the night I was attacked my biggest sin was that I had gone grocery shopping, bought some jelly beans and gave them to her as a surpise gift, but a little later while watching something on t.v. I ended up eating them myself. She started screaming “How could you eat my jelly beans?!” so I said “Look, I’m gonna go get you some more”. I left and bought her two boxes this time. She was already starting on her first bottle of wine and asked me to pick her up another one, gave me the cash so I bought her another bottle of cheap $5.00 wine.

    When I got back I was working on a project and she demanded I recite the words to myself out loud so that she could concentrate (this made no sense to me) on writing her autobiography about being a stripper which she was sure was gonna make a million dollars (just like how Nick East used to talk over and over and over about how his book he finished that he wad worked on for over 10 years was gonna make him a millionaire).

    She was really nasty and bossy about it but I complied just to make her happy as she was drinking. Then all of a sudden she screamed that I have to “SHUT UP” because she has then trying to re-read what she wrote and she couldn’t concentrate with noise of any kind.

    I said “WTF?”. Then she said she wanted me to be her ghost writer. I told I was too busy to do that and she got really angry and threatening. Then I got on the phone with my friend, the anthropologist. He’s an ear witness to her screaming “I’m coming in there with you” when I told her I’m going into my room so I can talk to him. When I shut the door that’s when I heard her go into her room and start loudly yelling how I’m a back stabber and so is my friend (for what reason, I don’t know) and that she’s going to kill us. I’m sure the nextdoor neighbor if she was home and in her bedroom could hear this. I decided to knock on her bedroom door and ask her from the other side what her problem is and to please calm down.

    Soon she starts talking about how I killed her cat (because I told her she couldn’t have a cat live here if she were to move in as the last apartment she lived in reeked horribly of cat piss everywhere and she despite my efforts of putting her in contact with my friend who’s a fanatical cat-rescuer decided on her own to take the younger cat to the pound, where it was subsequently put ot sleep. For that reason she believes and started screaming I killed her cat!).

    Then in a completely psycho rage while still sitting in the couch across from the one I was sitting on she starts saying over and over and over again “I’m gonna fucking kill you! I’m gonna fucking kill you!” At this point, I realized she was completely gone so I calmly walked to the balcony told my friend I’d call him back, hung up and I called 9-1-1. She apparently wasn’t aware I was calling 9-1-1- as I stepped down out the outside steps and of her sight. Clearly she can be heard on the the 9-1-1-tape (they tape all calls), this time not saying but screaming “I’m gonna fucking kill you”.

    After that. I figured her screaming was enough to get them here real soon but I was mistaken and it took close to an hour and a half to finally arrive and that was not until after I called 9-1-1 two more times.

    After I called 9-1-1 the first time I called my friend back and she came out and started screaming some more. I backed away on to the balcony and at one point she rushes me and grabs my cell phone with both her hands trying to rip it away from me and she managed to hang up my call. She also cut the middle of my left middle finger right real nicely where it bends (that stung the entire time I was locked for 4 days and nights and I had to get antibiotic cream for it).

    Then after that she lunged for my neck and with her little hands tries to strangle me. She was not able to get her hands around my adams apple so I just stood there calmly but yelling “What the fuck are you doing”?!

    After waiting for about 45 minutes I called 9-1-1 a second time asked why they weren’t there yet and told them she attacked me. This time she realized I was calling 9-1-1 apparently because when I came back up stairs after talking to them I could here her on her speaker phone with 9-1-1, herself. She was calling them in retaliation for me calling and saying I did God knows what. So after realizing this I called them a third time to explain what she had just done.

    When the cops arrived, the first things she did was yell at them that I’m a piece of shit and that I killed her cat. I explained to the cops how her cat was put to sleep by her and she’s blaming me for it. At one point they cuffed me to detain me, saying they were not arresting me. I agreed not to file any charges against her if she would calm down, otherwise they said one or both of us would be arrested. Things calmed down and we both had agreed to just stay in our separate rooms and they warned us that if one of us calls them again tonight one or both of us would be arrested.

    The cops were on their way out the door, and Sophia was already in her room when she suddenly decided to walk back into the living room and say in an “Oh, by the way fashion” “He hit me”. I was stunned. I could not believe she was doing this! There were no visible marks on her anywhere from where I was sitting but she told them that I had asked for sex from her, she said no, so I then just bitched slapped her in the lip. If this were so why did she not mention this until now and why did I call the cops the first two times?

    The cop looked at her very closely and said he could faintly see some mark so I was arrested. I figure she must have hit or cut herself when she went into her room. Even though the cops later said to the detective they didn’t believe her, they said they were forced based on her testimony and some tiny mark to arrest me.

    When I spoke to the detective he told me he spoke to my friend who I was on the phone with and that the charge is going to be lowered from a felony to a misdemeanor, but I spent 4 days and nights (since this all happened on a Thursday night and I couldn’t get out until Monday afternoon) in jail for having been attacked and having done nothing to her.

    She has to be one of the most evil, dumbest and most insane people I’ve ever met. From now on if I want excitement I’m just gonna put on a movie, hopefully one that doesn’t suck.

  8. The Colonel says:

    jeremiahsteele sasys:

    ‘From now on if I want excitement I’m just gonna put on a movie, hopefully one that doesn’t suck.’

    I suggest ‘Silence of the lambs’. That’s my ideal inspirational fun. Chris Carter designed Dana Scully’s character based on agent Clarice Starling. BTW, all the sequels sucked.

  9. jeremiahsteele says:

    I’m watching Terminator Season one as I never seem to have time to just sit and watch t.v… plus I hate commercials.

    The idea of time travel is interesting. It’s allegedly happened according to some guys involved in The Montauk Project. What I can’t figure out is if one can keep going back and forward through time has does anything start or ever end?

    Another thing I don’t get is why is The Terminator Season only 9 episodes long? My original Star Trek Season one had 29 episodes! Did they terminate 20 episodes?… oh yeah, it’s all about paying more and getting less these days. I almost forgot.

    That Terminator chick is hot. I like to sperminate her.

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